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This is a beautiful piece that will certainly get some on to think on it. I wonder why only a few notice this? Certainly I didn't!

It's like we can envision some sort or fantasy- like scene when we read every word per line.

"Does every happy moment stay within the waves?" Now, that is a very excellent question! Does it,really? Does it not? How should I know? >_<

all in all, I like/ love this piece very much. Does this describe a mythical being? Even if it doesn't, I feel that it is.

And why the heckz did I miss that link?!

Loved it!
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Parsat Dec 6, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks for the critique...I don't think that this poem is perfect by any stretch of the imagination (certainly undeserving of your five stars in everything), but I'm glad that you enjoyed it and that it made you think.
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Phiatoz Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, creativity deserves a perfect star, even if others don't quite agree with that. I quite like this piece, I even Favorited it!

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